Dellaran (![[info]](http://l-stat.livejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif){kind=small} dellaran) wrote,@ 2006-08-23 14:24:00 |
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As more than one person pointed out to me, one of my previous attempts at Japanese senryu was broken - it was 5-7-6 morae, not 5-7-5. Fear not, dear readers - after weeks of agonizing and soul-searching, along with a few minutes of sleep-deprivation-induced hallucination in the shower, I present the revised version.
蒸し暑さ
冷房あれば
入りたい
mushiatsusa
reibou areba
hairitai
In the summer heat
If there's air conditioning
I'll go anywhere
蒸し暑さ
冷房あれば
入りたい
mushiatsusa
reibou areba
hairitai
In the summer heat
If there's air conditioning
I'll go anywhere
